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Scary, I got where you were going with your with your architecture thoughts. I feel strongly that we don't always have to tear down but maybe revitalize.....
I can't even focus on half the words Lauren it all runs into a mess before my eyes. Please let your thoughts gel, and slow down and punctuate! One thought flows into another, and it makes me not want to bother to read it, which does you a disservice. My eyes can't grab onto it like this.
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Scary, I got where you were going with your with your architecture thoughts. I feel strongly that we don't always have to tear down but maybe revitalize.....
I can't even focus on half the words Lauren it all runs into a mess before my eyes.
Please let your thoughts gel, and slow down and punctuate!
One thought flows into another, and it makes me not want to bother to read it, which does you a disservice. My eyes can't grab onto it like this.
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